Friday, 30 August 2019
Lawyer paragraph.
Nearly every year there is a new type of phone, computer, iPad, tablet and more. More and more people are getting addicted. So addicted some people aren’t taking notice of what is happening around them. Some people care about their devices more than anything. Schools need to start making days where there are no devices. Devices can be fun to have and use, but there are always things that aren’t so fun. Cyber bullying, losing friends and even death. Death? A man had got hit by a car because he was walking so focused on his phone, he didn’t see the car coming...
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Lily, you have argued your point well using the structure of the lawyer paragraph. Your last sentence certainly drives your point home!
ReplyDeleteThe lawyer paragraph is not my favourite thing to write with. It honestly in my opinion is kind of boring.
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